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Bleach Fanfiction // Closet Games // Chapter 10 - Final 
3rd-May-2010 11:32 am
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Author: Darkprism
Title: Closet Games
Rating: Mature
Pairing: Renji & Byakuya (Ren/Bya & Bya/Ren)
Word Count: ~44,000 in total
Warnings: M/M explicit sex, angst, language, mild kink, toys, voyeurism, did I mention sex? There's lots of it.
Notes: This story is set in my world, Monoshizukanohi. There are minor references to Naruto characters as they exist in that world.
Summary:

Life's good for Abarai Renji and gets better when he meets a mysterious man in a bookstore erotica aisle. But what starts out as a casual fling quickly turns into something more. Who is this man who refused to tell Renji his name? And what will Renji do now that he's fallen for him?

Chapter 10 FinalCollapse )
Comments 
4th-May-2010 02:14 pm (UTC)
Awww, poor Rukia tho. I hate being kept in the dark so i understand how she feels. But awww i cant believe its over, i really love this fic. I will mem it ok? can i? can i?
12th-May-2010 05:08 pm (UTC)
You absolutely may Mem this!!!

*laughs*

Thank you so much.
4th-May-2010 07:54 pm (UTC)
I loved this story and I'm sad to see it end. I really do like the way you portray Byakuya and Renji as a glasses designer still cracks me up (it doesn't help that at the end of one of the episodes in the early 200s, Renji picks up glasses for himself and Byakuya in the real world and they're multi-colored with gems and glitter and in the shapes of stars and hearts, frickin hilarioius). I look forward to reading more works from you. Thank you for sharing this awesome pieces with us devoted readers.
12th-May-2010 05:09 pm (UTC)
Icon love!

Thank you so much for reading and the kind words. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the story.

<3
6th-May-2010 11:35 pm (UTC)
I really enjoyed all of this wonderful story, so glad you wrote this. The boys( /men) were just wonderful, and I really loved to follow renjis and byakuyas development both personal and in der relation ship. Good thing to approve their relationship, and there happy together!! sad thing it ends here, but the end is awesome.
hope you already work on a new (fanfiction-)project.
thanks so much for sharing this story with us!!
12th-May-2010 05:09 pm (UTC)
I had a lot of fun helping these two grow and watching them being unable to keep their hands off one another. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

Much love.
7th-May-2010 10:35 pm (UTC)
The quick follow-up of one-liners got more than one laugh out of me. Perfect witty commentary and beautifully fluffy scene to end it. I am content ^__^
12th-May-2010 05:10 pm (UTC)
Fantastic; couldn't ask for more!

Thank you so much.
18th-May-2010 01:32 am (UTC)
Arguably the best AU ByakuRen ever. You write some truly mind-blowing porn and lovely prose in general, madame. I'd love to see some more of the Bleach side of Monoshizukanohi. Love how you threw in a little ShunJyuu and Yumikka at the end there. ;)

Really wonderful job. You're a very talented writer.
18th-May-2010 02:54 am (UTC)
Wow...thank you so much!

I'm thrilled you enjoyed the story.

*hugs*
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17th-Apr-2011 05:52 pm (UTC)
*HUGSHARD*

I'm so glad you continue to like this one. It's one of the author's favorites. XD

And I love you pounding hands and kicking feet. *GRINS*

<3
22nd-Jun-2011 09:59 pm (UTC) - GAH
I just came back to reread this story for the umpteenth time and noticed that i actually never left a comment to express my absolutely being in love with it! I think that the cause is that the hot, smutty passages are way too good to think of something as mind-challenging as forming a coherent sentence - and the non-smutty, fluffy parts just leave me squeeeing in fangirly joy!
This story is one of my favorites ever - witty, humorous, steamy hot and with a wonderful flow! *Bows*
23rd-Jun-2011 04:01 pm (UTC) - Re: GAH
Oh wow! Thank you so much for letting me know you've read and enjoyed this story. *glee*

I had a lot of fun writing Renji, though this piece was challenging thanks to the narrative point of view I chose. I do these things to myself. *laughs* I'm kinda proud of this piece, and it makes me so happy to know people still read and like it!

Thank you for the lovely feedback. Very much appreciated!!!
28th-Aug-2013 05:47 pm (UTC)
I adore listening/reading this story again and again. Much love sweets
2nd-Sep-2013 05:20 pm (UTC)
*snugs!*

Thank you. I've really got to clean up my epithets in this sucker and do more recording on it. *laughs* I am so glad you still enjoy it, though. It's one of my favs, too.

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